show not tell

The room was a mess

Stuff was everywhere throughout the room, it was as if a tornado had hit it.

the food was good

my mouth was watering at the look of the food as the smell swept passed my nose.

the teacher was mad

his evil, angry eyes glared at me across the room. He knew I was whispering about millies newest hairstyle.

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